The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Today, the whole world is dealing with one or the other environmental issue such as pollution, global warming and so on.Various measures are considered as a solution to them. However, it is believed by many that increasing the fuel price would solve the world's environment problem. I partially agree with this belief. This essay presents the ideas that prove that this is not the only possible way for this problem.
To begin with, it is undeniable that increase in the price of fuel will definitely cut environment issues but to some extent only. Higher fuel rice would force people not to drive personal vehicles and use public transports as much as possible. This will not only reduce the pollution in the environment but would also help in reducing traffic congestions.
The environmental degradation has been done to such a level that only increasing the prices of fuel will not help much. There are some other essential measures that also need to be taken to keep the environment clean and improve its condition. For example planting trees, more efforts on recycling products and more use of renewable products over non-renewable resources. Trees will not only reduce the amount of pollution in our environment but will also resist major natural disasters like drought and flood. In a research conducted by Harvard University on 25 cities of U.S.A, IT was found that cities with more greenery has less environment issues.
To conclude, we have degraded the quality of our environment through our acts of selfishness. Destruction is always easier than construction. But, there is an urgent need to preserve our surrounding. One way to do so is increasing the fuel price which will further reduce traffic and pollution in the environment. Some other significant solutions such as reforestation, use of renewable resources could also help in solving world's environmental problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16286644951 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87938670686 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8269076263 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2352941176 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263159704051 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881979833694 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909433317302 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176679982574 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100239325989 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.