Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Some people advocate that zoos should be prohibited because of its savagery. However, others think that captivity is an inseparable part of conserving numerous species. While zoos, perhaps, are cruel to some extent, I believe that we should not dismiss the role of zoos.
According to several people’s perspectives, zoos are cruel and unethical because they restrict the movement of animals, which prevents them from freely choosing where to go and how to live. Instead, it is thought that they have a right to enjoy their freedom to do whatever they want in natural habitat. If wild animals are captive, they will experience a sense of depression and anxiety, adversely affecting their mental state. Besides, captive animals might gradually forget the skills and capabilities to hunt preys, in which they are of fundamental importance when living in the wild.
Alongside the negative influence of zoos, I believe that zoos are responsible for the conservation of numerous animals nowadays. First, animals in good zoos could get a varied and high-quality diet with all the supplements required, and any illness, which they might be prone to, will be treated. Their movements might be restricted but they could experience a safe environment to live, and they are spared bullying and social ostracism by others of their kind. Second, they do not suffer from the threat of predators, the pain of parasites, starvation, and injuries. For instance, recent research has shown that the average captive animals have a greater life expectancy compared to their wild counterparts. Hence, zoos could be beneficial to the long-term survival of animals.
In conclusion, although some people believe that animals should not be kept in cages, and zoos should be banned within society, I think that zoos have a positive impact on animals, especially in terms of protecting them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78023779958 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576666666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7169731596 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263978705043 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959063360241 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946862696376 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197451843909 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981386835397 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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