The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing sVe of resources like water, food and fuel.
To what consequences may overpopulation lead?
In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation
Governments all over the world are grappling to tackle the adverse impacts of overpopulation. As the population is increasing rapidly, natural resources are depleting at a faster pace than ever before. This will lead to extinction of biodiversity, and consequently, future generations may find it difficult to survive on earth; however conscious planning and measures can help in alleviating these issues.
Scarcity of ecological resources will aggravate the extinction of wildlife, creating an imbalance in food cycle, which will eventually make it problematic for humans to survive on the planet earth. One, owing to increasing population, water, food and also, the fuel consumption has been accelerated, leading to issues such as drought, flood, deforestation, ultimately causing wildlife extinction. For Instance, many conservationists report the extinction of numerous animal and plant species, due to scarcity of food and water. Furthermore, as plants and animals are getting vanished from the earth, the entire life cycle is getting impacted, which will one day lead to extinction of homo-sapiens on our planet.
To cater to the adversities of large population, government should spread more awareness in people to use eco- friendly products and avoid overconsumption of resources. One, instead of using non-biodegradable products, people should be encouraged to use biodegradable products. For instance, government in many countries has banned plastic bags, to promote the use of paper bags. Two, general public should become more cautious to not waste water, fuel and food products. To elucidate, people are always suggested to use bucket instead of shower, whilst taking a bath, to save water.
In conclusion, people need to put strain on conserving the currently available reservoirs of natural resources, otherwise, future generations will not be able to exist on this planet.
- Some people think that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people believe that the libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them However others do not agree Discuss both sides and give your opinion 77
- Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... to promote the use of paper bags. Two, general public should become more cautious to not wast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61538461538 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20780900814 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9963532236 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145506633716 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048027361334 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268919572137 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796388785882 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138646644866 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.