Some individuals trust that nowadays computer is more an obstacle than a helping hand . Others consider it such a devices without which they would not be able to live or work. What do you opine.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals usage of computer one of most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. Some people think that computer is more an obstacle but other assert that without its uses people not be able to live or work. I will discuss both the arguments in further elaborating paragraphs.
To begin with, computer is beneficial for society as well as individual. Firstly, computer is an indispensible part of life because it make the life of people easier and more comfortable.Computer provide multitasking feature so masses can easily store their personal data for long time. Moreover, it is the best source of entertainment as well as education. Students can prepare any assignments with the help of computer and they can listen to music for relaxation of mind.
On the other hand, in some cases computer create an obstacle than a helping hand and there are enormous reason behind this notion. Firstly, criminal person do crime with the help of it they can target field by using computers. Moreover, most of the heckers hack the personal data of people eventually masses get face great losse into their properties as well as business.
In conclusion, computer is beneficial for individual as well as society but in some cases it is detrimental but it is the responsibilities of people which way do they use in thier personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...n indispensible part of life because it make the life of people easier and more comf...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Computer
...e of people easier and more comfortable.Computer provide multitasking feature so masses ...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...on of mind. On the other hand, in some cases computer create an obstacle than a help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96734693878 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96179757883 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4772101443 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267304126338 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924180163499 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101181627733 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162835281868 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466050216408 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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