Some people believed that digital technologies in the home may brings benefit to people. Others consider that people are too dependent on digital technologies nowadays.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
At the 21st century, the technological side is getting more and more modern. It enables the ability to connect person to person in a cheap, effective way. Nowadays, while there’s a group of people believed that tech makes
From one side, technology is truly a game-changer in our daily life, especially in the field of communication. <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">us more hospitable, there’s an opinion stated the contrast idea. In this essay, I will analyze </span>both of these<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">, therefore will give my opinion.</span>Throwback to a hundred years ago, the procedure to send a letter was very complicated. It needed to travel days, even weeks to reach to the destination. With the development of hi-tech gadgets such as Internet, the way we keep in touch with each other changed dramatically, with just a click. Furthermore, at remote places, navigation tools are the useful tools to use for charity actions. Say, a remote island in the middle of the sea needs some quick supplements from other countries due to a natural disaster. A plane will be sent, and from the altitude of 4000 feet, with the help of GPS and satellites, the supply package can be dropped correctly, which can saves thousands or millions of souls.
On the other hand, the growing of technology can cause the loss of social contacts. Due to the capability of communicating so quickly, devices such as smartphones somehow being the killer of real conversations at coffees or public places. A research shown that the number of letters sent at the time from 1900 to 2000 has been decreased to almost 90%. Moreover, being dependent to computers and other devices raise an alert about being unconscious. There are so many fatal accidents occurred because of paying to much attentions to handheld equipment, and they cause mass panic to civilizations.
Overall, the development of technology in our life is a must-do, but also the social contact and the awareness about surrounding activities should be considered carefully. In my opinion, to use tech devices wisely, we should balance the usage time every day, and try to be more socialize with each person we meet, so we can start ourselves a good habit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
...age can be dropped correctly, which can saves thousands or millions of souls. On t...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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...o we can start ourselves a good habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18681318681 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4005829199 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2551398369 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.058823529 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113359339787 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033415999048 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389975358875 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701585598824 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025189460786 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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