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Pets should be treated like family members.
Do you agree with this statement? Give reason to support your opinion.
I believe that pets should be treated like a family member. Although it may sound quite strange for many people, however I have some reasons to argue for such claim.
First of all, deciding to have a pet means deciding to accept the responsibility of care for another living being with its all needs. Pet animals are not capable of expressing their needs and feeling the as comprehensive as humans do which means they can't literate by words. Therefore they have a limited means of communication to express themselves to their owners. Besides, keeping an animal in house is equal to separating it ...
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Sentence: First of all, deciding to have a pet means deciding to accept the responsibility of care for another living being with its all needs.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, pre-quantifier
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If a person do not realize him/herself of being ready to accept such role for his/her pet, it would be rather fair no to keep one at home.
Suggestion: If a person does not realize him/herself of being ready to accept such role for his/her pet, it would be rather fair not to keep one at home.
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