Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Protecting environment is the best way to live on an earth. One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in split opinion regarding climate condition. Some homosapiens believe that saving the environment is an authority of ministry’s of a nation. Whereas, another group of thinkers support that one has to take own hand. Dissertation on both the doubt is discussed in ensuing paragraphs along with my state of mind.
Scrutinising the former opinion, the foremost argument the supporters would state forward is that, nation should be banned plastic and those items, which are non-biodegradable. This is owing to make pollution and spreading nuisance. Also, they should be passed out grants for nursary infrastructure and developing greenhouse for storageing trees to avoid dangerous rays from sun. Furthermore, they should broadcasting such news to spread awareness in people through TV, news and online sources. To add into these, they can also apply a stringent rules and regulations for those civilizations whose cut down greenery. To exemplify, if someone caught to cut trees, then they should be penelised.
On the contrary, the latter view suggest that, individual person can understand by ownselves to preventing travel with their personal vehicle. Instead of this, one should be using public transport for travelling. To add into these, people need to start plantation into their homes. A small step towards climate change make enormous positive effect in future. Moreover, everyone should use less packed material and try to avoid plastic bags and use recycled things. With it, natural resources are the best to prevent climate condition.
To draw the curtain I would put forward my state of mind saying that,it should be more responsibility of government as well as individual human beings to deal with this kind of situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...put forward my state of mind saying that,it should be more responsibility of govern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, whereas, as to, kind of, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96040803014 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652027027027 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5787634283 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7777777778 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228066916577 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569002976715 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386738892762 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125746859799 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044447392878 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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