Your company has recently introduced new uniform for the staffs. Write a letter to your manager that you are not happy with the new uniform:
Explain why you are not happy with the new uniform
What you want new uniform to be like
Giving some suggestions.
Dear Rajesh,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the new outfit provided to the telecom vertical employees.
There are a couple of reasons because of which I am not satisfied with the new uniform. Firstly, the colour black makes me feel demotivated and dull. Secondly, cargo pant portraits casual attitude at work. Therefore, I do not feel excited about coming to work in this attire.
According to me, the dress code should be navy blue denim and polo t-shirt of orange colour. The t-shirt should have a logo of size (2*2) on the left side depicting our vertical symbol. As a result, this attire will represent one’s professionalism to work and an orange colour would make everyone lively.
I would be grateful if you would place an order for the mention clothes but getting another uniform could also alarm budget issues. Thus, in this scenario, I would request you to make the current suit Friday outfit, this way weekday productivity would also not get hamper as well as the current dress is appropriate for Friday mood.
I hope my request could be acknowledged.
Yours sincerely,
Vikas.
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...ange colour would make everyone lively. I would be grateful if you would place a...
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...ld be acknowledged. Yours sincerely, Vikas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67415154104 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675531914894 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6979819637 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170589586245 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569662458493 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736050512126 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803294657326 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535578509201 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.