What do you think about extracurricular activities? Are they helpful or need to be improved?
Nowadays, in addition to studying, extracurricular activities are considered as one of the indispensable content in the school. Are they helpful or need to be improved? These are some reasons for my viewpoint
Firstly, these activities help students to relax and cut many pressures after a hard studying day. Secondly, they not only help them to be healthier but also upgrade their skills. For example, sports like soccer help to train agility, vigor and arts help them to develop their abilities. Finally, they can expand social knowledge in real life through social activities to learn how to plant trees and protect the environment.
In conclusion, extracurricular activities are very helpful. Besides spending a great deal of time studying, they also need to involved in other activities.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 126.0 315.596192385 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3253968254 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98578348147 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6335729459 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3117768391 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153761811964 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140177160441 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210679136115 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559365268128 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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