Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?
t is often thought by the majority of the people that they are now residing in a global village, while some believe that it is not beneficial for society. In my opinion, I think that globalization has many benefits in terms of connected world and transportation facilities, but it has some negative impacts on culture too.
On the positive side, development in technology has facilitated communication across the planet. With the help of smartphones and the internet, people can connect with their overseas friends and family members within a fraction of seconds. Multinational companies such as KFC, Walmart and Reliance digital can monitor their business activities and employees through videoconference, skype and other online methods of continuous connections within branches across the world.
Another positive development of globalization is the availability of advanced and quickest means of travelling. In other words, airways facilities make it possible to travel from one corner of the world to another corner comfortably and conveniently. Besides this, it has also saved a lot of time that was wasted in commuting through ships in old times.
On the other side, the globalized world has negative impacts on the culture of different nations. Nowadays, the difference between traditions, languages and fashions are disappearing and the whole world is adopting one type of culture and language which is accepted worldwide. Consequently, the diversity of the Earth with respect to culture would be at the risk of extinction, and it would become a place of boredom.
In conclusion, although globalization would affect the cultural and traditional values of different countries negatively, it has still many benefits for the people to make their life easier and productive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: T
t is often thought by the majority of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, second, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46570397112 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13066960178 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5801601996 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125539954472 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470760839528 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270194305831 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623945055007 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200123084492 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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