You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.
Write a letter to singer.
say how you feel about his/her performance
give details of your music-related activities
explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear Mr Jassar,
Greetings for the day!
A moment ago, I visited your concerts in Delhi at Hockey Stadium. Actually through this letter, I would like to congratulate you about your splendor performance at there.
I was feeling jubilant, when I listen your original voice at concert. You are amazing singer, and your performance was breathtaking. When, I was saw you at first time, then it just like as a dream that come true.
I was admired by your voice and music career. so, I was decided to take classes in singer to pursue my career as a singer. Along with this, I am keen interesting to guitar, which I learned from my music teacher.
If you allow me, then I would like to join your band. By joining your group, I can help you at back stage as a support singer, which is vital for every music group to perform at live events. I enclosed my performance CDs with this letter. Not only I can play guitar, but also I am a very good writer. Hence, I can write songs for you.
Could you give me a chance to show my talent in front of you? If you interest in my proposal, then you could contact me on
this number 908089080.
I am looking forward to hearing from you positively.
Your Sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seen'.
Suggestion: seen
...rformance was breathtaking. When, I was saw you at first time, then it just like as...
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Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...admired by your voice and music career. so, I was decided to take classes in singe...
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Line 12, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y proposal, then you could contact me on this number 908089080. I am looking f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49777777778 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47685184493 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2077741791 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5294117647 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342869669087 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121831689082 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748949743291 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140106669527 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952927476025 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.93 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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