You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
-say why he/she would not enjoy going yo college
-explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
-suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Rahul,
I am doing great and I hope you are also having an amazing time. I received your letter yesterday evening when I came from the office. I know you have just completed your graduation after having 16 years of non-stop education. Actually, I believe that it is not easy to attend college lectures again after graduation. In my opinion, there would be no excitement and enthusiasm because you already have college experience. So, you would feel bored at college, if you join it again.
Having a job at this time would be a great decision for you and your family. It would be an amazing feeling to earn yourself and taking care of your personal expenses. In addition to that, your life will be more exciting and happening. Although you will have to do some hard work initially, you will be on track after some time.
Furthermore, I would like to suggest some job options where you would be able to find employment easily and more conveniently. If you remember, I asked you a few months back that you should work on technical skills, such as computer programming, reports development, and advanced marketing. I am certain that you will get a job in this field very soon near in the future.
I am looking forward to hearing from you with an offer letter.
Best wishes,
Matt Henry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ay evening when I came from the office. I know you have just completed your gradu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68995633188 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57738861194 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.466739606 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245064413837 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868609847106 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522474807166 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15834023573 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311424196286 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.