You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the cafeteria manager. In your letter:
• explain what you like about the cafeteria
• say what is wrong with it
• suggest how it could be improved
Dear Rajah Sir,
My name is Paik Bhat, and I am one of the student of Biotechnology department. I am writing this letter to convey my personal message about the cafeteria as I am regular customer of your canteen. The cafeteria staff is very helpful and friendly, especially Rama Uncle. The color combination of walls, doors and windows is the best as compared with other part of the college.
However, unfortunately the food quality is not in the standard range. More importantly, it is not served hot and the tasteless. Yesterday, during lunch I observed there was smell in the rice, and for that I also had a harsh discussion with your staff. Finally they changed my food, but the concern related to food quality is still existing with every day meal; therefore, I request you to look into the matter on immediate basis.
As per my suggestion, you can increase the price of same food if there is a budget issue, as no student is complaining about the cost of product currently. We can also raise this issue in student union so that everyone agree with the price hike in canteen food.
I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Paik Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rajah Sir, My name is Paik Bhat, and I am one of th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...had a harsh discussion with your staff. Finally they changed my food, but the concern r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, Paik Bhat
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssible. Yours Sincerely, Paik Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63003180735 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.971195844 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183251773088 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567320872939 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468393396592 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898320001453 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363251795696 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.