A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
thank him for the invitation
mention why you can not attend the birthday party
offer to meet him some other day
Dear Jack,
Hope you are safe and sound!
How're your family? I am so glad, you invite me on a birthday party of your eight year old daughter. I feel jubilant, when I open an invitation letter. Owing to this, I would like to express my graduate through a present, which I send along with this letter.
Actually, On that day my brother came from Canada after five years, So I will have to go to airport to receive him, so I cannot attend this party function. Along with this, we will going organised a family party for his warm welcome. I hope you can understand my situation.
However, on 26th, September, I will come at your town to attend a office conference relates to my new marketing strategies. If you free, then I would like to meet you and your family. Not only my family will come on that day, but also our best friend Kamal will also come to accompany me. Hence, we decided to spend some time in evening at new opened five star hotel at your town. If you and your family come, then this moment will be adorable for us.
Looking forward to hearing from you positively,
With love,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...arty function. Along with this, we will going organised a family party for his warm w...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ber, I will come at your town to attend a office conference relates to my new mar...
^
Line 9, column 362, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hotel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hotels'.
Suggestion: hotels
...time in evening at new opened five star hotel at your town. If you and your family co...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this moment will be adorable for us. Looking forward to hearing from you posi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45365853659 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26062696288 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7805748319 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2307692308 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231828011783 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880490085622 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464559849122 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122466974656 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584294782516 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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