Which of the following is the most important thing for a country’s leader to do to ensure the prosperity and success of the country.
1, create more jobs for the unemployed;
2, improve agriculture and lower the food prices;
3, provide affordable housing.
Today, there are many issues and matters in living conditions of countries where people live, and these things would have been concerned and considered by governments or their managers or their presidents. All of these issues sometimes cause problems which solved by countries. Then, all of these problems had to figured out by people who manage these countries because that is the necessity for countries' successes.
First of all, there are so many solutions about these issues such as unemployed people, a shortages, the food prices, the costs of housing, etc. Some of these fixing ways are more effective than the others. The important and the best way it depend's on wherever, however, whatever they used. For that reason, decision is the most important thing for which one is the perfect. so, people of community should focus decision-making activities first. For example, we think people who live in Africa's countries, and there are several food problems and these countries governments have to follow improving their agriculture facilities.
Also, nowadays the big countries have more modern equipment such as human-kind robots, and they have technological materials such like computers, cell-phones, etc. Although all of these tools increase their factories or companies productivities, their unemployment rates would be a high, and these impact people of countries mental and physiological health negatively. In these types of areas, unemployment rates should be dropped by government.
In addition, in poor and undeveloped countries such as middle-east countries, there would not be enough houses and buildings, and their residents sometimes live outsides. The most parts of these countries have much more homeless. For that reason, these countries should prefer solving house problems for their members.
In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, which way is the best method depend's on what type of problems countiries have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a shortage' or simply 'shortages'?
Suggestion: a shortage; shortages
...these issues such as unemployed people, a shortages, the food prices, the costs of housing,...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ant thing for which one is the perfect. so, people of community should focus decis...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lving house problems for their members. In conclusion, taking account of all abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5049833887 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84631340218 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8648638551 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5625 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168016525626 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682566097434 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738426162704 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992361591485 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728124715415 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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