Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
As people drown more into technology, more and more natural resources are degrading! Evolution of construction instruments and vehicles has made exploiting the natural resources easier and this accessibility and increase in population resulted in increasing in demand for resources, one of these resources mentioned are natural resources! One example of these natural resources are animals. A lot of animals have become extinct as a result of disruptive human activities and steps needs to be taken to stop these damages to wildlife.
First of all, animals are an essential part of our ecosystem. The food they provide and a lot of things that are derived from them are crucial for the lives of human beings. Animals preserve and balance the ecosystem with their presence, diminishing them can cause severe consequences for our survivals on this planet. We get a lot of our foods from animal in a direct and indirect manner. They provide us meat, milk and other nourishments that are essential for human body. they are the main source of the protein and In case of their extinction we would face difficulties finding a protein resource.
In case of considering the animals as a nourishment source one may ask about the benefits of preserving wild animals. They are not the main source of our nourishment. So why should we preserve them? Here, a really important factor that we should consider is that animals can balance the ecosystem with their presence. The relationships in the ecosystem is like a chain, every specific kind of animal is a nourishment supply for another animal and thereby diminishing a specific kind of animal would cause a certain group of animals to go through a famine, thus impairing the whole ecosystem. Another important benefit that is caused by animal presence is maintaining the forests. Animals consume some of the unnecessary herbs in the forest and by doing that they gave the opportunity to forests to grow better.
All in all, animals play an important role in our ecosystem. Personally I subscribe to the view that all of the creatures that are created by god are here for a reason and for that I believe that animals are an essential part in the environment and consequences of their existence or diminishing would lead to catastrophic results that can be ascertained in short time after their disappearance, not only would it destroy the ecosystem, but also it would lead to vanishing of this spectacular environment that is the result of their presence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, thus, in short, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02403846154 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89558411369 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473557692308 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.293073438 48.9658058833 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.941176471 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112331647563 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328331085354 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437463088575 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737999164621 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652899430507 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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