For some people, the ideal holiday is to get away from their normal routineby staying in a hotel or camping in a countryside. Others prefer to stay at home and do things they do not normally have time for. What do you think are the benefits of going away on holidays?
Nowadays, many people believe that it is an essential thing to have an opportunity to go out from their daily routine life on special resorts and vacations. Whereas, other people prefer to stay at their homes or doing some delayed work during their slack time. Entertainment during leisure time has multiple advantages on person's life and character. This essay will first discuss how getting away off the beaten track of the routine life impacting individual's character and surrounding people as well as it will show the significant merits that could be gained at working level and how it could improve the career life.
Holiday entitlement is highly important for person's life and his relatives. Spending weekends in a special places which is distinct from your hometown can improve the feelings and emotions and can release the feeling of being stressed out from the heavy workloads. For instance, travelling to different places that have stunning landscape and sightseeing views will facilitate chilling out at these areas which can enhance your feelings and reinforce the inspiration from being relaxed and comfortable.
On the other hand, this regularly change is also vital for better working and management. Despite, holidays can decrease the working time, it can leverage on the production level of work and achieving good results. For example, according to study have been conducted at France, the results concluded that workers and employees who are keen on spending their free time for enjoyment and entertainment showed higher mental abilities and increasing levels of their production at work compared to people that ignore these times. Thus, having the chance to make time for refreshment is viable for job upgrading.
As such can be concluded, Although there are a lot of people who searching how can they have a blast in their weekend, there are other category who refuses to change their mind on doing tedious and repeating work every weekend. In my opinion, I convinced that get going for any vacation is worth one's while to load off mind of job problems to improve person's abilities and feelings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15942028986 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61635911405 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568115942029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2131487938 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.923076923 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251718716844 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914757846044 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069929132879 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14194132236 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03965025943 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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