International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Countries hosting international sporting events, which are always expensive, often ends up in financial crisis post the event. Investing huge amount of money without a guarantee of its return for several reasons is the root cause to this financial crisis.
A country spends on a sporting event is solely to establish its pride and showcase its potential in the international platform. Sporting events, like Olympics and Wimbledon, prodive such forums. This unnatural drive to waste humongous amount on an event that lasts only a week or two eats out more than half of the country’s available fund since such events not only about constructing stadiums and courts but also to house participating athletes fom all around the world. For instance, the London 2010 Olympics had a new lavish town built to accommodate players in additional to big stadiums.
However, there is also a hope that hosting such events would encourage their own citizens to participate in sports and the venues may be used by locals to train themselves. Eventhough the housings of venues will be of no use, the game courts could be used. This particular hope never seem to realise the reality. For example, the same London Olympic town and sporting constructions went into disuse afte the ceremony and the money that has been pumped in it never returned. Consequently, leaving the citizens and generations pay for it in the form of tax.
To conclude, international sporting events requires massive funds to organise and conduct. Countries hosting such events for pride and hope of motivating their own citizens fails to realise the debt it brings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13909774436 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78870599249 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4697122568 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126508576244 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476575408477 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447062419456 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885548186573 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277364063273 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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