The table below show the percentages of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The given table provides the result of the percentage of the population regarding age groups according to gender, with age groups being categorised into five different groups in a particular town for those who rode bicycles in the year of 2011.
Overall, the ratio of citizens using bikes in two genders experienced the same tendency of decreasing via five age groups.
In terms of the gender of female, the population in two first age groups joined in activity of riding bicycles occupied the large proportion, with ranging rom 0 to 9 and 10-17 years old, 51.4 and 42.2 % respectively. In contrast, in the age group of 40-59, it reached their lowest percentage at 12.3%, as compared to 17.1 and 18.5 percent in the two remaining groups, from 18 to 39 and above sixty years old respectively.
Turning to the remaining gender, there was an approximated percentage of people who ride bicycles to the age group from 0-9, 50.0% exactly. However, it just account for 24.6% in the teenagers no more than the above gender in the same age group, and while the oldest group possessed 13.2%, as compared to 9.7 and 8.0% in 18-39 and 40-59 group respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('approximately') instead an adjective, or a noun ('percentage') instead of another adjective.
...ning to the remaining gender, there was an approximately percentage of people who ride bicycles to the age ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68805238333 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8498067904 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330444122962 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170843917978 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1349613062 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207864956527 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151599878713 0.0819641961636 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.