Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “Every individual should spend at least a year living in a foreign country?” Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Staying in our comfort zone is maybe the easiest thing we do in our life, but getting out of the comfort zone is not the easiest, it takes courage, risks, willing and power; however, consequences are tastier than staying in comfort zone. Hence, whenever there is a chance to get out the comfort zone, I would definitely take that chance as advantages for me. For this reason, I am fully agree with the statement that every individual should spend at least a year living in a foreign country, because it is whole new life existed in out of comfort zone. I have three reasons why I agree with this statement.
First of all, every country have different culture, language and territories; every culture’s ricual has different meaning. Hence, during our life time I think we should learn some of them so that we can communicate easily with different people from abroad. Moreover, our knowledge range will definitely broaden by experienced those cultures. Henceforth, spending a year in foreign country is beneficial for individuals also it is interesting and astonishing to learn about totally different culture. For example, in United Emirates of Arab, kissing is prohibited by their culture, conversely, in Italian, there are many people kissed in street.
Secondly, during our childhood we spend time with our family who is familiar with us, after we grow up, we live alone or someone who is unknown but came from same country, even our surrender is familiar with us because they speak same language and same culture. Hence, to challenging ourselves, living in foreign country would be the best way. By doing that, I really can understand ourselves and true self-contained individual will born. For instance, during summer vacation, I spend whole summer in USA with different kind of people who came from different city. First, we cannot communicate well, and I even struggled to settle down. Then, few weeks later it became easier because I was learning American culture and other countries as well. This three month helped to become real independent individual who can live anywhere without struggle and miscommunication.
In conclusion, whether it sounds risky or not, living in foreign country is beneficial for individuals as long as we live for about hundred years doing the same thing, at same place with same people. In so much as, I would hundred percent agree with statement that every individual should spend at least a year living in a foreign country only by themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ges for me. For this reason, I am fully agree with the statement that every individua...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...as different meaning. Hence, during our life time I think we should learn some of them so...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'bear' or 'be born'?
Suggestion: bear; be born
...and true self-contained individual will born. For instance, during summer vacation, ...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ndividuals as long as we live for about hundred years doing the same thing, at same pla...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ith same people. In so much as, I would hundred percent agree with statement that every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03631961259 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72593203553 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520581113801 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8264658539 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.555555556 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282688502958 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952273484639 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106885612419 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187919639301 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856457050441 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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