You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
write a letter to the accommodation officer at college in your letter.
Describe the situation.
-explain your problems and why it is difficult to work.
-say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear sir,
I would like to enlighten you on a problem that I am facing now with my roommate.
I am living in room no. 32 in the north wing. My main problem is that guy who is a party aholic person. he comes in the room after a late night and a majority of the time a bunch of the guys celebrates parties with him in the room. Thus, I have been disturbed by each and every night. Moreover, he uses my personal stuff even without notify me. Some times I have to find that stuff by doing hard work.
Adding to it, he plays songs in the room so, I cannot concentrates on my studies. As of next month, my exams are coming. I have to be prepared for that. Hence, I need a new accommodation that is quiet and with or without any roommate.
This is a humble request and I would like you to take strong and fast action on this matter of urgency.
Yours Sincerely,
Ramneek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... that guy who is a party aholic person. he comes in the room after a late night an...
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Line 13, column 168, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new accommodation'.
Suggestion: new accommodation
... to be prepared for that. Hence, I need a new accommodation that is quiet and with or without any r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19298245614 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28770853512 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625730994152 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5870194212 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.2142857143 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2142857143 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169298472939 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487806802801 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476155395322 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106034823553 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391883181017 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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