Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In today's modern world, the presence of television and its effect on the life of mankind has become a major concern. Thus, it is claimed that television has demolished the connection between family members and reduced any kind of community sense. Personally, I completely agree with this statement and this essay will discuss several reasons explaining my opinion.
To begin, it is undeniable that the constitution of family and how it was several decades ago have changed dramatically. While in 1990 the daily routine after work for adults and school for children was a family lunch when they were describing their morning, nowadays this is obsolete. All the members of the family are closed in their rooms without the need for communication with others watching the magic box named TV. Regretfully, our generation, those who were born at the end of the 20th century, has seen the change inside the family and it affected our lives in a negative way.
To continue, there is not only an alteration in family life since TV was introduced globally but also in the human relationship with other members of our community. Furthermore, it is evident that there are not too many social events and that there is a declining rate of people participating in them. Undoubtedly, almost all of us prefer to spend our afternoons watching tv instead of visiting friends or going to events to discuss communal problems. From my perspective and opinion, this way of thinking and living will alienate the humankind.
To conclude, there are several examples that show on a daily basis how dangerous is television and how destructive might be in the future. However, it is in our hand to reverse this situation which can have detrimental consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9756097561 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74061691467 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6242795823 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277526804497 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826512435082 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424433181879 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148799381898 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487349190108 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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