Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to make families closer?
The closeness between families has reduced greatly compared to the past. Lack of time due to busy work schedule and preference for privacy are the two main reasons. At the same, allocating some time for family get-togethers tend to make families to interact with one another.
First and foremost reason is unavailability of time. Almost everyone is employed today and the only time they get apart from work is weekends since the afterwork hours of weekdays are often spent within family members and in taking rest. Considering the weekends, people prefer spending those days for themselves privately, be it watching a film or doing an activity related to their hobby and so on. Privacy plays the important role next to time deficiency. For instance, in the life of a middle class family, parents would be busy working in weekdays and concentrating on their childrens activity during weekends sparing no time fo communicating to the outside. Consequently, isolating them from others in the meantime.
One and only way to bring families closer is families get-togethers. A proper time should be allocated to meet and mingle with relatives, may be during festive occasions or anyother ceremonies. While being together relationships will be strengthened, new family bonds will be created, and problems will be sorted out. For example, unmaaried people may get a chance to meet their spouse in family gatherings, and thereby increasing the family network. Therefore, family meeting must be organised, whenever possible.
To conclude, families lost their closeness lately due to lack of free time and privacy; however, family get-togethers have clarly proven to unite famiies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37218045113 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8775193461 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.000277777 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261996347433 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893189336864 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679839688184 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156999405263 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757170244747 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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