You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to askyour manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter● explain why you want to take time off work● give details of the amount of time you need● sugges

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask

your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

● explain why you want to take time off work

● give details of the amount of time you need

● suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to see if I could ask you a favor of getting five days off from work. Please allow me to elaborate on my situation in more detail.

I am asking this favor because my mother is seriously ill; I have to take her to the hospital for a complete checkup. Our general physician advice that she has a cardiovascular ailment that needs to be assessed at the earliest. Therefore, a range of tests will be performed for diagnostic purposes.

Her appointment is due on Monday; about seven tests are advised by her cardiologist on consequent days. I request you to grant leave for five days that is from 23rd to 27th August so that I could take her to hospital as there is no one to look after her because my siblings are living abroad.

I understand it will create a lot of trouble for you to manage in my absence. Rest assured that I shall be kept in touch with you through email and will attend all calls from the customers.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Maryam Khan

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59574468085 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54650609662 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643617021277 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3495480503 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5454545455 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198314797929 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700657443509 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454008973297 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104988442679 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305709642746 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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