If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to drastically change our way of life. What is your opinion?
There is no doubt that the future of the earth in the upcoming years are relying on people attitude against their surrounded environment. therefore, many scientists believe that in order to preserve the planet, individuals should immediately revised their way of living. In my opinion, I wholeheartedly agree with that and this essay aims to explore this issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, its irrefutable that the life on the planet these days have changed drastically in the last few decades. Plenty of animals and plants species in fact have affected by human activities. For instance, most of people were living in the past days by hunting some animals. As a result of a random hunt, many animals have been extinct. this extinction indeed impact on the whole global ecosystem. these activities are unfortunately still existed and affecting the ecosystem diversity. Thus, in terms of having a flourishing future for our lives on the planets, people should cut off these actions.
In addition, earth recently is suffering from the escalation of the pollution rate. this serious situation will have a negative impact on the whole planets in the future. Since, many plants, animals and even human being might be affected by this pollution. Take cancer disease as an example of gas pollution exposure. this fatal disease cost many people’ lives every year. therefore, governments should establish an eco-friendly items that have no effect neither on human nor on other creatures on the earth such as solar panel, wind power and etc..
To sum up, the future on our planet is mainly depending on our way of living. therefore, If the individuals wish to have a better quality of life, they should amend some of their attitudes such as hunting, or using some detrimental agents and replace it by some more environmental friendlily items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the whole, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1935483871 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73936311974 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9680113573 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173343697369 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512371154438 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645516520666 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10243836762 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395790200105 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.