You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
Explain why you have gone to live in the new city
Describe the place where you are living
Invite your friend to come and see you
Dear Farman,
I hope you are doing great. As it is in your knowledge that I recently applied for a job at SPARC, you would be happy to know that after appearing for their final interview last week, I have been offered a job at their Lahore office. I had no other choice but to move to Lahore until there is an opening in my preferred department.
The office is located across from PIT university in Johor Town near Hanjarwal Road. I was fortunate enough to have been granted a stay at one of their own hostels inside the office boundary. it is much like a regular university dorm with an added benefit of my workplace just minutes away. The place is also a lot greener due to the fertile land of Punjab and I feel the air to be quite refreshing.
since you live near Kalashahkakoo which is not much far from where I am staying, I was thinking if you could come over and check out the place yourself. I can arrange an extra room for your overnight stay since you would be coming from 100km away.
I look forward to seeing you.
Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...own hostels inside the office boundary. it is much like a regular university dorm ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...el the air to be quite refreshing. since you live near Kalashahkakoo which is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as for, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41326530612 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34708850454 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1212266394 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221440855982 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08211084613 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782222355371 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14718170572 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803744438057 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.