Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
nowadays some parents have an idea that they should be active to make their youngsters a good citizen. Personally, in my opinion school is the best environment to mold each child.
Out of 24 hours , children spend most of the time in the school which they have many opportunity to explore themselves.present days teachers are not that much stringent toward children like past days. it will open gregarious relationship between students and teachers. they will not hide their personal conflicts to teachers, so that teachers can guide them in better way. In addition, they can serve the society in the best way.
Peer groups have a good influence in character development of a child. in school they are getting many friends from different family environment like poor, middle and high status family. to mingle with all status kids encourage them to share their things, showing compassion, empathy and sympathy to others.
schools also have competitive in nature also, which force them to accept success and failure are the different sides of the same coin. this attitude will motivate them to see their life more enthusiastically and leads a better community.
to en-capitulate, parents have several roles to modify the behavior of their wards, still school have more role to make a better citizen and which is irreplaceable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, thus, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1935483871 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82048923032 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.212888343 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108128027118 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386636484423 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393129448975 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657502047693 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496966802893 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.