You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to address you about the problem of a router which I purchased from you. It is N-300 black model which was ordered on 19th July 2019 for order number ONX9027902.
I require a high bandwidth for my internet which your router used to provide. Now it is not working as expected and turns on/off abruptly. It seems to have malfunctioned and unexpectedly blinking for internet connectivity.
As I am software consultant and need to work from home most of the time over internet. I am not able to work under these conditions. Because I cannot give an excuse to my clients about internet not working, it is rather frustrating.
I want a replacement for the router as soon as possible. You can pick it up from my home address which is with the order number and deliver it to the same.
I hope you take it into consideration.
Yours faithfully,
John Miller
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78616352201 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79684056664 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3143476162 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4166666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.166666666667 4.34317383033 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232689106202 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744434642296 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548182602544 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108202882106 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458349924261 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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