some people think that books should be stopped in school and that videos, films and computers should be used instead.
to what extend do you agree?
It is suggested by some people that teaching with books are fine and there is no need for a change, whilst others believe that books should be replaced with video tutorials and movies in school which seems logical.
On the one hand, some people suggest that books are adequate for studying and there is no need for other educational tools like video instruction. These people suggest that films tend to make people lose their concentration and do not concentrate on the actual lesson, making it harder for the teacher to teach. This, however, seems to be incorrect, because students cannot concentrate unless the lesson is appealing for them, so it is not the matter of tools which is being taught with, it is the matter of the content of the book.
The more logical argument is that as the new technologies arise, individuals and organizations should adapt themselves to them and educational establishments like schools and universities are not an exception. With teaching with new educational software, not only can pupils learn better, but also the lesson becomes more attracting for them. However, schools should not get rid of books completely; they can also make use of books as a side-tool for teaching.
On balance, there are better devices for teaching other than books so educational establishments should apply new methods of training like software and movies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... suggest that films tend to make people loose their concentration and do not concentr...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re attracting for them. However, schools should not get rid of books completely, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76215696714 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.3376569682 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206042269637 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987971949967 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589072460496 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13494687167 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473667907304 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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