The best way for a society to prepare it's young people for leadership in government, industry,or other fields is by instilling in them in a sense of cooperation,not competition.
While a bit of competition is necessary, the best way that a society can produce great leaders is by instilling a sense of co-operation and team management in them.
We must carefully look back in time, we have got some great leaders who have left their own imprints on the sands of time,right from Mahatma Gandhi of the pre-independent era to the Mark zuckerberg of the present times. The one quality that unifies all these leaders is their effective man-managing skill. The question of how efficiently someone can manage their team and how effectively he can convince his team to achieve an united goal. As far as I'm concerned, a true leader is one who skillfully inspires each and every individual of the group and extract all of his potential for useful work.We celebrate Dhoni as a great leader because he manages people well and extracts the best out of his team. We celebrate Mahatma Gandhi as the father of India because of his perseverence and team management skill.
A group can only succeed if only a single thought echoes throughout the entire group and the leaders job is to ensure that. A leader must hear out all his member's opinion and then must collectively make a decision. Obviously there will be difference of opinion in a group, Each will have their own view and the leader unless co-operate's with the group and understand them , he will surely cannot achieve the goal.The leader must listen to the problems of each of his team members and must solve them.
As leaders of our society, they are expected to solve problems and in most of the cases a problem can't be solved individually, these problems could be enviromental, technological,social. All the problems require a group which is leaded my a person who inspires them to solve a problem. With increasing population we will be facing huge problems and a united front is required to solve these problems. Ofcourse competetive spirit is required, it will drive the team to achieve things, but unless there is enough clarity of thoughts within the team members, it will only lead to futile efforts. Do we want our youngsters to be highly competetive martians like the Hitler's and the putin's. Absolutely not. We want leaders who efficiently manages and co-operates with people to achieve the various problems in the society.
Thus, instilling co-operation in students and younger people is rudimentary which when added with a th a bit of competetive can prove effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93269230769 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85856951967 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487980769231 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7225313801 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0676348977832 0.243740707755 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278697893414 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457161957221 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604109204539 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583975634492 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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