The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"The population on Balmer Island increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island plans to limit the number of mopeds rented by each of the island's six moped rental companies from 50 per day to 30 per day during the summer season. Last year, the neighboring island of Torseau enforced similar limits on moped rentals and saw a 50 percent reduction in moped accidents. We predict that putting these limits into effect on Balmer Island will result in the same reduction in moped accidents."
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.
the argument establishes a direct relation between the number of accidents and number of moped rented in the summer season. This poses a need to consider the following assumptions before implementing the plan.
Firstly, it is biased to consider same the balmer and torseau island. it is possible that balmer is more popular place for people to live than the torseau island. keeping other things constant, if there are less people on torseau island than there will be less chances of accidents overall. Moreover, it is also possible that torseau island is well developed and people need less to use mopeds.
Secondly, limiting the rental companies might not solve the problem of increasing number of accidents. If people stated to buy their own mopeds, than it will be ineffective to limit the rental companies. Moreover, if such pattern of owning personal mopeds developed among people, it will not only increase the number of accidents but also deter the business of the local rental companies.
thirdly, it is also unclear whether the reduction in mopeds will result in fewer number of accidents. less people on mopeds will bring more people on roads as pedestrians and again there is possibility of same or increasing number of accidents. hence it is important to consider and supply other information in order to accept the argument as a whole. this information can be about the development in the Balmer Island, limiting the number of pedestrians on the roads and availability of the options.
above all, there is a need to consider alternatives and more information to establish a link between the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians. Similarly, it is also desirable to consider other factors between the
Balmer Island and Torseau island. otherwise this argument is inconclusive and is based on flaws.
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- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette."The population on Balmer Island increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balm 43
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 299 350
No. of Characters: 1495 1500
No. of Different Words: 131 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.158 4.7
Average Word Length: 5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.668 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.182 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.762 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.424 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.771 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the argument establishes a direct relation ...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...accidents and number of moped rented in the summer season. This poses a need to consider the foll...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...der same the balmer and torseau island. it is possible that balmer is more popular...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keeping
...people to live than the torseau island. keeping other things constant, if there are les...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ing other things constant, if there are less people on torseau island than there wil...
^^^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...le on torseau island than there will be less chances of accidents overall. Moreover,...
^^^^
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple need less to use mopeds. Secondly, limiting the rental companies might not ...
^^
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
... people stated to buy their own mopeds, than it will be ineffective to limit the ren...
^^^^
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...over, if such pattern of owning personal mopeds developed among people, it will n...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thirdly
...siness of the local rental companies. thirdly, it is also unclear whether the reducti...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Less
...ll result in fewer number of accidents. less people on mopeds will bring more people...
^^^^
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ll result in fewer number of accidents. less people on mopeds will bring more people...
^^^^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...same or increasing number of accidents. hence it is important to consider and supply ...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...same or increasing number of accidents. hence it is important to consider and supply ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...rder to accept the argument as a whole. this information can be about the developmen...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Above
...oads and availability of the options. above all, there is a need to consider altern...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ormation to establish a link between the number of accidents involving mopeds and...
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Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le to consider other factors between the Balmer Island and Torseau island. otherw...
^^^^
Line 11, column 35, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Otherwise
...he Balmer Island and Torseau island. otherwise this argument is inconclusive and is ba...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 35, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: otherwise,
...he Balmer Island and Torseau island. otherwise this argument is inconclusive and is ba...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 299.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15050167224 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75083561212 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448160535117 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 705.55239521 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6567898523 57.8364921388 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.25 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.70786347227 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225262956696 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822827682199 0.0743258471296 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568561303312 0.0701772020484 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127563335118 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359697279573 0.0628817314937 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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