People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
As there are subtle and austere aspects in human's behavior, it seems that some people incredibly make their own way, whereas other people are unwittingly affected by the forces from their environment; moreover, sometimes a person reveals her/his willpower in the time of the hardsihp, whereas exactly the same person seems to be vulnerably palyed by the outer forces. As so, there has been a variety of views on the will power of a human being: on the one end of the spectrum of the view are there people assuming that people's behavior is determined by the outer forces; on the other end of the spectrum are people concerning that the more important factor determining the behavior of human is their inner will power.
It is true that while living in the world which is an aggrestion of a great number of people and a greater number of intersts, people are largely affected by outer factors. In the extreme situations such as war time, this tendency of human to follow the power and authority seems like its our innate nature. I still agree with the statement, however, that we humans have made the life by ourselves because of the following reasons.
First, whether or not considering the outer factors (e.g., advice, pressures, situations) on their decision, or how much degree they would put their priority on those factor, are also the processes of people's own decision making. For example, if I follow one's suggestion or even commission, this behavior can be seemed like I was just forced to make that decision. However, deciding to follow is also come from my will.
Second, we should consider our natural states when there is not much severe hazards or violence in making decision. In those situations, we humans are
In conclusion, the argument that people's behavior can be affected by forced holds some truth, but my personal view more closely aligns with the statement that we humans have the will of freedom to decide our own behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...llow the power and authority seems like its our innate nature. I still agree with t...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... of the following reasons. First, whether or not considering the outer factors e.g., adv...
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Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...cision making. For example, if I follow ones suggestion or even commission, this beh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89221556886 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4985725065 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532934131737 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.1121082411 60.3974514979 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.4 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 5.21951772744 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307820501559 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098400827902 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882880573447 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147819725762 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10118433353 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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