All education and healthcare should be funded by government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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All education and healthcare should be funded by government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The education system and medical facilities are important necessities of an individual, hence government is bound to fund more towards them and make these available free of cost to every citizen of the country. I fully support this idea and think that these two are the basic problems in the developing countries. Though, some rules should always be laid down so that it should not get misused.

Government should spend a huge amount in the healthcare sector and developing good education system in their country. When these things are availed freely by the citizens, the people get more focussed on building and learning new things. They are not worried about their health insurance or giving fees to institutions for getting good education. Furthermore, they will try to channelize their money in the economy of the country that will indirectly help in the growth of the nation.

In contrast, another view is that the privatisation of the healthcare sector and education helps more in the growth of the economy, as per capita income increases. Private sectors create more jobs and opportunities to the people by which they could easily pay their expenses. For example in USA, these sectors are privatised and the country is ruling the world. But can this be made possible in developing and underdeveloped countries too?

In the end, the government should be made the two essential needs of the people always free to its citizen that will make them more secured and dependable on the government, strengthening the country in my opinion. However privatisation sector brings more income to the country and increasing opportunities for the people though that is unachievable in poorer countries due to lack of resources.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...trengthening the country in my opinion. However privatisation sector brings more income...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, so, then, for example, in contrast, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81709412603 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535460992908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0076916503 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166997119223 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599205023377 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493488824468 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105260995954 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299973080679 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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