Whether university level students should stay at home or school accommodation. Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of students should stay at home or school which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it beneficial while other reject this notion. This will further elaborate both aspects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will explain but the most preponderant stems from the fact that students should stay in home because they can concentrate on their study and safe in parents care as well as home is good place for every student. As an illustration students can help their parents when they stay in home. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that students can understand their responsibilities and their work. Needless to say all these merits stand students should stay at home or school.
However there are some pitfall that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that if students stay in school accommodation they can addict of drugs and they can choose bad company as well as students forget their responsibilities and they cannot connect with their parents furthermore if students stay in school accommodation they get not good facilities like home. Besides students cannot concentrate on their work and students forget respects of ancestors and parents because they can know about their culture and traditions. Hence it is apparent why many are against students should stay at home or school.
According to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of students should stay at home or school are instrumental indeed but the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 6.10837438424 311% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1690647482 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74490602451 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510791366906 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.219447863 50.4703680194 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.7 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276975610357 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158967928628 0.0925447433944 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102837661165 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202477320167 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448062110038 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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