Job letter to manager
Dear Mr.Jones
Hope you are doing well.
This is Praveen and we met in the red eye flight from Chicago to New York on 2nd of September.
I would like to quickly check with you regarding potential Job opportunity in your restaurant. When we spoke last time, you told that you are looking for someone from Computer Science background to design the website for your restaurant. Being from Computer major, I worked in creation of website for Food Services as a part of my final year project and used open source tools to build the same. Hence there is a significant drop in the design cost.
If given an opportunity, I would like to attend the interview for this job and showcase my skills which is very relevant to the job. I am pretty sure that I can add value to the organization.
Looking forward to work with you in future.
Thanks
John
+1 123-345-4678
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-06 | kumarkrish | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jones
Dear Mr.Jones Hope you are doing well. This i...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hicago to New York on 2nd of September. I would like to quickly check with you r...
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Line 11, column 397, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ed open source tools to build the same. Hence there is a significant drop in the desi...
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Line 21, column 34, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... Looking forward to work with you in future. Thanks John +1 123-345-46...
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Line 27, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... work with you in future. Thanks John +1 123-345-4678
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76129032258 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54586236716 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664516129032 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.466768916 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0717929804632 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249272868451 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516708986661 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0331802341477 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505474185236 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.