Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is said that computers had changed our way of life in many ways. Nowadays, there are computers everywhere: your mobile phone, the TV, the cooking robot... Thus, computers made our way of life a lot easier.
However, that opinion is not shared by everyone. Some people think that computers are not a solution but a problem. Some time ago, in the late 90's, the Internet spread around the world: companies and governments put a lot of effort in to bringing connectivity to as many people as possible. Nevertheless, people got addicted to computers and some people at the time didn’t see that as a good thing. Also, in these years, computers weren't so accessible to all people, so these opinions were in part unfounded opinions.
With the smart phone invention that opinion shifted, though. Smartphones gave people of all ages an opportunity to experiment with them and as of today, nearly nobody rejects having a smart phone. Thanks to these mini-computers, things like controlling your house remotely, can be done. Moreover, people who are far away from each other can make contact with their family or friends via internet video calls and that's a plus. But computers, aren't only smart phone or PCs, they are everywhere, in fridges too!
So, in my opinion, computers have changed our way of life improving it. Now, tasks that were difficult become easy (printing, copying or writing, for example). Nevertheless, a correct usage of computers is a must. Getting addicted to computers or smartphones is the only drawback we have to worry about.
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- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 67
- Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01538461538 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73572410717 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5506464764 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104040670008 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359574647762 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247583032023 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062007821012 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170271566672 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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