As a result of tourism, many historical buildings and sites are being damaged beyond repair.
What could be done to prevent this?
Tourism industry become globalize. Because of internet, International tourist become able to explore such historical Empires. Due to overwhelmed tourist, historical buildings are being spoiled; however some steps can be imposed for prevention from adverse effect on such ancient Constructions.
firstly old historical buildings take us down the history Lane. To give protection from deterioration of ancient ancient, government should enhance the security as there should be proper rules and regulations; should be followed by visitors, otherwise in case of floutation them adequate punishment must meted out. As a consequence,there would be the possibility of fear among persons who are willing to roam such places. In addition to it, during the entry ,checking should be must such as to check their either identification card or licence etcetra.
Aecondly, ticket for exploring such ancient area should be compulsory. The cash collected from such system can be used for repairing such premises. Consequently by adopting mentioned criteria, crowd will be reduced day by day. Apart from this ,it is the responsibility of bureaucrats ,the awareness should be disseminated among people as civic sense curriculum should be implemented in schools or colleges There are some efforts, incorporated in some countries to examlify fact .Jordan government has declared the importance of its ancient sites throughout the Queen Alia International Airport. Therefore it seems clear that it is its name the eminent to notify tourist about the importance of such buildings
To recapitulate, with the given aforementioned plausible views, it is abundantly clear that although the law of enforcement agency have onus to preserve search historical buildings but it is also the responsibility of people who want to explore them it is rightly said that old historical buildings unravel many mysteries of history therefore, it is the opportunity for people to familiar with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60200668896 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16556906535 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 139.913366052 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.583333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246448022714 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910009949195 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410643841927 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147866771455 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380298212802 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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