The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment.do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Today, we live in a polluted world that influences our health. Many diseases are on the rise because of water, air and in general the environment pollution. Hence, cleaning the environment is necessary for our life and governments should do it to improve health care but I think there is another way which seems important and I think it has the same value. I will talk about these two ways.
To begin with, the environment has a direct effect on people’s life. Therefore, the lowest pollution in the environment can bring about many hard diseases. The water people drink, the food people eat and the air people breath, all of them originate from the environment. So if governments clean that, they can prevent many illnesses.
For instance, in a few years’ age, in an area of Iran near the Aras river, cancer was on the rise with an unbelievable speed. Nobody didn’t know the exact reason. But after some researches, scientists found out because of the nuclear activities the water of Aras had polluted and people drunk that water. many people not only get cancer, but many of them were dead. While if the government noticed earlier, they would prevent these diseases by cleaning the river.
Furthermore, another effective way in which the government should exert to improve health care is investing in education to getting familiar students with diseases at school. Children should notice illnesses and ways in which they can protect themselves. On the other hand, if they don’t learn anything about diseases, they won’t have a healthy life. For example, many people around the world die annually because of a heart attack. In Iran, the government decided to teach some basic activities in school in order to get familiar students with this phenomenon and some basic tasks to renew people like artificial breath. now a result of the research shows that the number of people who die from this disease decline and it shows the importance of teaching.
In conclusion, I think cleaning the environment and teaching students are two foremost ways which the government should apply to improve health care. The environment has a direct effect on people’s life and students by knowing about diseases, can have a healthy life in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...to renew people like artificial breath. now a result of the research shows that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in general, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03183023873 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68751713452 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511936339523 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.815958364 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169796675621 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499972993875 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733789079405 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106266090569 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528658913554 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.