It is thought by some that it’s better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
many people these days prefer to live in rural areas that away from the noise and pollution that urban cities have. On the other hand, lots of individuals enjoy to be surrounded by various essential services which is only existed in the main cities. This essay aims to discuss these contentious issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that main cities have plenty of advantages for many inhabitants. Firstly, people have a chance to select a range of facilities options. To illustrate, there are a plethora of various facilities such as schools, hospitals, shopping malls, and etc.., and people can choose whatever they want based on their capabilities. For instance, numerous shopping malls are infrequently making special offers for many items, so people can get the benefit of it and buy high quality items with considerably lower prices. Moreover, people can select the best schools whom offer high quality with low price. Therefore, living in the main city might expand individual’s choices.
On the flip side, it’s irrefutable that rural area provides quiet environment which participates in enhancing people lives. First of all, countryside places have almost free pollution which is attributed to lower traffic jam that bigger cities have. Consequently, very lower noise comparing with the main cities. As a result of this healthy environment, people who are living in such areas have the lowest risks of suffering from various diseases that associated with the main city life. Thus, rural environment might contribute in evolving people health in dramatic way.
To sum up, although rural towns offer unique living style that have lower noise than cities which might boost people mood and health, I wholeheartedly prefer to be closed with several essential services that merely found in urban cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Many
many people these days prefer to live in rur...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy being'.
Suggestion: enjoy being
... On the other hand, lots of individuals enjoy to be surrounded by various essential service...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tail and before coming to a conclusion. To begin with, there is no doubt that ma...
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Suggestion: etc.
... as schools, hospitals, shopping malls, and etc.., and people can choose whatever they w...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ools, hospitals, shopping malls, and etc.., and people can choose whatever they wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68646608019 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3218004538 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0773831279279 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030445612015 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344940480815 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529990023895 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134549632455 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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