Doctors these days are saying people are not getting enough physical exercise. What do you think are the problem of this trend? What can be done to solve this problem?
Health is among the principle importance of human life and pupils are not able to do physical exercise regularly. Firstly this essay will suggest that the biggest problem caused by this phenomenon is increase obesity and then submit following healthy routine is the most viable solutions to this problem.
The foremost problem caused by not allowing sufficient time to do exercise might increase the fat level in their body. Human being nowadays consumed quite enough amount of calories from their food and energy drink and do not allocate time for exercise like doing yoga, visiting gym and walking during the morning or evening period because of their busy schedule. As a consequent of that, they are suffering from multiple disease and visiting hospital quite regularly for their regular health checkup. For example, The Himalayan Times recently reported that top level employee in the private sectors visit hospital at least twice a month for their physical checkup in comparison to other employee.
A possible solution to this problem would be to follow proper health plan. Health routine such as consume proper and healthy diet, follow regular exercise, timely visiting hospital for necessary health advisory from doctors could be done consciously, thereby stopping the unhealthy fattish level from their body. As a result of that, they would have a healthy life and can spend their family saving for healthy family functioning. For instance, this is most evident in my country that, educated family in urban area seriously do the necessary exercise and receive health advisory from their family doctors time manner.
In conclusion following regular exercise is the only a gateway to have healthy life, people who could not follow the healthy plan would be affected by various illness and spent their family money only in hospital. However more and more people in future practice strict health routine in regards to make their family more happy and healthy.
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their family more happy and healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25316455696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34495806205 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534810126582 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.74381217 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158282424911 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692688002353 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606408995065 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110662195993 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659585250068 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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