In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. this could be good news for an individual but it may have a negative consequence for our world as a whole
what are the benefits and risks of people living up to 150 years
In recent times, science has made a lot of advances in every aspect of life, even in areas until now considered difficult. While some people may laud the fact that scientists may be able to increase the lifespan of humans, others believe that it may have some negative impacts in our present universe. This essay will elucidate the benefits of people living up to 150 years which includes instilling of family value from generation to generation and the realization of their dreams. The essay will also discuss the drawbacks of longevity.
To begin with, living long will benefit society as people will have long enough time to teach and inculcate proper values to their children. A lot of the social ills in our world today is as a result of lack of proper upbringing and that has led to the social decay that pervades our society. Secondly, I believe the world would have witnessed more inventions if people like Michael Faraday and Albert Einstein just to mention a few of such brilliant minds, had lived longer, we definitely would have robbed the grave of some of its riches (this is coming from the saying that the richest place on earth is the grave), and they would have most probably given us more scientific discoveries.
Nevertheless, there could be some disadvantages to living a very long time too. If people lived for 150 years, the quality of life will be greatly affected, as they will be burdened with a host of degenerative diseases and sicknesses of the old such as Alzheimer’s and arthritis. Another consequence is that it can put a strain on the resources of a country, an example is Japan, where a huge chunk of their national budget goes into the welfare of the aged and not so productive citizens.
In conclusion, despite some of the downside to long life on earth, I believe we would have enjoyed some priceless and indescribable moments if we lived longer and this cannot be quantified hence this development will largely be a positive one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 24, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81286549708 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66769402853 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56432748538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9658430146 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.636363636 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313760801732 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994967549457 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747891069478 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17316176568 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530924783584 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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