Peary
tpo 28
Both the author and the lecturer discuss whether Peary reached to the North Pole or not. The passage claims that there are arguments provide strong support for the truth of Peary's claim. The professor, on the other hand, completely rejects whatever mentioned in the reading through citing three reasons.
First, both the author and the professor talk about investigation of the National Geographic Society. According to the passage, the National Geographic Society examined the Peary's records and equipment and concluded that he reached the North Pole. The lecturer, nevertheless, rejects the author's view and illustrates the idea that the investigation of the National Geographic Society was not objective because the committee included some members who were close friends of Peary and they could not examine records carefully in two days.
Second of all, both the reading and the lecture discuss the time of journey. The author argues that Tom made the same trek in less than 37 days in the same condition experienced by Peary, so Peary's claims are not impossible. However, the professor refutes this, saying that food was delivered to them by airplane in unfavorable conditions and it is not possible to travel to the North Pole in less than 37 days.
Eventually, the passage and the lecture address the subject of evidences in the photographs. The passage goes on to mention that the shadow in the photograph makes it possible to calculate the Surf's position in the sun which shown that the Surf's position as it should have been at the North Pole on that day. In contrast, the professor points out that shadows in the photograph cannot prove anything because Peary used primitive cameras and it is hard to be confident about the sun exact position.
All in all, the author confirms Peary's authenticity about reaching the North Pole, while the professor not only cast doubt on it, but he also demonstrates that these evidences are not convincing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the North Pole in less than 37 days. Eventually, the passage and the lecture ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, nevertheless, second, so, then, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 322.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0900621118 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63008826833 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524844720497 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0133121327 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474690562461 0.272083759551 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156346084673 0.0996497079465 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114771118319 0.0662205650399 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249460135004 0.162205337803 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338375521441 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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