You are looking for a part-time job.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
- introduce yourself
- explain what sort of job you would like
- say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir,
My name is Tim, I am a Pakistani national from Quebec, and at present, I am studying at Waterloo University to pursue a Master’s degree in the field of computer science.
I am writing to request you to help me find a part-time job, especially something related to computers. I would like to have an afternoon job; this would allow me to complete my studies in the morning. Ideally, a computer programmer job would be much suitable for me, given my experience and studies are both in this field.
I have 05 years of experience in computer programming, especially in java and python. I have designed quite a few websites that do not include the only frontend but also backend configuration. Another strong point where I feel comfortable is the database, and I have done a few projects covering several aspects of the database in the past. I am also attaching my detailed resume, which may provide you an overview of my experience and capabilities.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Tim
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| 2019-09-12 | toastedhead | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92696629213 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97377333747 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.600896852 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218876022228 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871419728801 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622941027459 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122624781346 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854052531548 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.