Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The given issue prompt as technology aimed to simplify our lives but it makes our live more complicated. This prompt sounds correct to me as humans are very used to technology. We even can't imagine our life without the technology as it transform us from caveman to mordern civilized human-being. As per my point of view, I am completely agree with the given prompt. Many relevant examples will be provided to prove the validity of point of view.
In the first example, let's take example of the teenagers who using mobiles and other electronic gadgets daily. Now this teenagers get addicted to the computer games such as PUBG, Pokemon Go etc and used to chat for hours from other friends due to which they were unable to concentrate on their studies. The technology is also responsible for this teenagers to not to play outdoor games. Thus, problem like obesity, cardiac problems arouse from young age .Many people get there spectacles at very young age.
Additionally, technology has provided a very helpful medium to transfer money without going bank or any financial institutions which is known as Online banking or Net banking. Now due to net banking one person can send a specific amount of money from India to USA within seconds. But the problemis that the old people who are not used to this system facing so many problems while doing transactions. Such people are very prone to cyber-crime because they do not know the usagwe of such modified systems. This results in increasing cyber-crime at very high rate.
In the converse, technology has changed our life at tremendous rate. Now a person can take breakfast in Delhi, take lunch in Mumbai and dinner at Kolkata. The ease of use of technology in form of Internet and fast transportation system proved as boon to mordern civilization. By support of technology only,we are able to planning to move to the Mars.
In conclusion, we can conclude that the technology as both side as a coin, positive and negative. Now it depends on person's mode of use whether he is using the technology for over-all development or looking for mass destruction by making nucler bomb. It completely depends on the person. Hence, many relevant examples were provided to provemy point of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ns are very used to technology. We even cant imagine our life without the technology...
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Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s per my point of view, I am completely agree with the given prompt. Many relevant ex...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...and other electronic gadgets daily. Now this teenagers get addicted to the computer ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., cardiac problems arouse from young age .Many people get there spectacles at very...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
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Line 13, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ilization. By support of technology only,we are able to planning to move to the Mar...
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Line 17, column 117, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ositive and negative. Now it depends on persons mode of use whether he is using the tec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92368421053 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69001436526 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6567730203 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0454545455 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118745152666 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342533581336 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572294195391 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650439361646 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475539417133 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.