TPO 23
The lecture and the reading discuss the declining population of the yellow cedar trees which live in North American. Although the passage claims that scientists have several hypotheses that explain this phenomenon, the speaker refutes this idea through several reasons which I will describe in this reporter.
First and foremost, the passage points out that some insect like a beetle attack to cedar trees, and kill them. The lecturer, in contrast, rejects this by claiming that healthy yellow cedar trees are much more resistant than other trees. He explains that healthy yellow cedar trees produce a chemical saturated liquid that it is toxic. Therefore, if the tree becomes healthy, the beetle cannot attack the yellow cedar tree. Hence, yellow cedar trees became damage and old before a beetle attack on them.
Furthermore, although the reading passage says that some bears destroyed yellow cedar trees by cut it down and used a high sugar content, the professor argues that yellow cedar trees were lived in both vast area and some islands. In the island, bears did not live, but yellow cedar trees became disappear. Thus, beers cannot be the main reason for declining yellow cedar trees.
Finally, although the reading passage says that climate changes would other reasons for the declining population of yellow cedar trees. The speaker disagrees by mentioning that in lower elevation the weather was warmer than the higher elevation. But, we see that more cedar trees destroyed in lower elevation. Indeed, it is not the main reason for the declining of cedar trees.
- TPO 27 70
- Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole 73
- Do you agree or disagree? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 70
- Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book thandoing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons. 70
- Do you agree or disagree? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26448988267 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3349055183 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412988152179 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169702426905 0.0996497079465 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053970407126 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263954047384 0.162205337803 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423671494894 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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