women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career. It is said: “A woman’s place is in the home.” What do you think?
Although women and men had different roles in the community at the very beginning of the world, these differences are slowly converging today. However, in many societies, women do not be given proper appreciation and even are receiving discriminations.
Firstly, I must admit that men are undoubtedly better to do physical tasks because of genetic inheritance. Therefore, the assumption that women can match men in everything is clearly flawed. You cannot deny that people need to be divided by gender in sports events. However, with the development of technology, the physical demanding professions are decreasing dramatically in the modern world so the impact from due to inherent differences between the sexes also go down. Women play the same roles which are as important as those of men in workplaces, family and relations. Seen the light of this, it is therefore clear that women are gaining the equal position compared to men.
On the other hand, the statement that women are less appreciated in society due to their traditional roles in the home is true to a certain extent. This is because in some traditional countries, like those in Mid-East and Africa, in general, women are still not allowed to do much things but stay at home, being a housewife. Consequently, a woman’s value is largely dictated by the society, culture and history. Thus, in those countries, women are owned by many opportunities and appreciations as well.
In conclusion, differences and discriminations do certainly exist, however, the roles women deserve is giving to them gradually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 277, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...eral, women are still not allowed to do much things but stay at home, being a housew...
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Line 9, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pportunities and appreciations as well. In conclusion, differences and discrimin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27559055118 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06855354068 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1776480535 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276621292628 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909332352502 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558710249386 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148505151053 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522976416254 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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