It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Nowadays, i am live in modern world and i have my r...
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... modern world and i have my rules. I am disagree to follow my parent's carrier and ...
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... to follow my parent's carrier and i prefer to select new opportunities job ...
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... life and it is my choose. For example, i will follow different way. I have diffe...
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...ifferent way. I have different aims and i am living in modern world with new cond...
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...n modern world with new conditions. So, i prefer to follow my ways and rules. So,...
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...prefer to follow my ways and rules. So, i will not follow my parents. First, i ...
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...t, i have to follow my ways. Therefore, i will select my job opportunity and i wi...
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...e, i will select my job opportunity and i will not follow the same job like my pa...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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...y parents they are doing business. But, i prefer to continue my studying and beco...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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...always tell me to follow our path. But, i am disagree with them. i like to select...
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...s tell me to follow our path. But, i am disagree with them. i like to select my carrier ...
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...our path. But, i am disagree with them. i like to select my carrier and i don&apo...
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...our path. But, i am disagree with them. i like to select my carrier and i don&apo...
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...s;t like to continue business. Further, i will choose my job and i will follow my...
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...ness. Further, i will choose my job and i will follow my rules. Second, i have ...
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...orld Bank as a senior manager. However, i am disagree with the statement that say...
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...Bank as a senior manager. However, i am disagree with the statement that says, 'it ...
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...apos; i don't like this statement. i like to choose my job and no one interf...
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...apos; i don't like this statement. i like to choose my job and no one interf...
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... my parents have in the past. Moreover, i am living in 21 century the age of tech...
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...n the past. Moreover, i am living in 21 century the age of technology and i have anothe...
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...t my carrier, Job opportunity. However, i am disagree with essay statement that s...
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...carrier, Job opportunity. However, i am disagree with essay statement that says, 'I...
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...ifferent from their parents jobs.' i like to choose new job with new rules a...
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...ke to choose new job with new rules and i like to carve my path not to follow my ...
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.... To sum up, it is modern world or 21 century, the time of technology and i don'...
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...t like to follow my parent's path. i like to choose my job by my selection w...
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...t like to follow my parent's path. i like to choose my job by my selection w...
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...lection without any interfere. However, i am disagree with the essay topic becaus...
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...on without any interfere. However, i am disagree with the essay topic because i have my ...
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...ondition than my parents have. However, i prefer to choose my job by my choice no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4880952381 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63766112983 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.316666666667 0.524837075471 60% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 9.59856630824 302% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.4314535353 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34615384615 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390668844319 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132228360194 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176635474156 0.0737576698707 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332012374283 0.150856017488 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.209022784926 0.0645574589148 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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