More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fast foods will solve this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The problem of obesity is burgeoning among people at a staggering rate. While some would argue that increasing the amount of fattening product is the solution; however, I completely disagree with the statement because people are addicted to the fast food and due to busy life ready made food is the preference of choice.
To embark with, people are in the habit of eating fast food due to its unique taste, so they are not ready to avoid it. Although ready to use food is rich in calories, people find it difficult to stop eating because of its irresistible flavor. Therefore, being aware of the health repercussions, they continue to consume ignoring any other thing. Secondly, working people prefer to eat fast food because of their busy schedules. Many people have tiring and tedious routine so that they are unable to spare time to prepare healthy diet, which consists of fewer calories at home. Therefore, these reasons provide strong ground that if the government raises the prices of fast food, it would have negligible effect on its consumption.
What is more, people are living a sedentary life having no time for exercise, sports, and other physical activities to maintain a healthy lifestyle. In other words, many individuals around the globe are doing odd jobs along with their full-time job which is mostly desk-bound leaving no room to burn bad calories. For example, in 2018, the United Nations stated in their annual report that 60% of high weight people ranged between 25-45 years of age, who work for long hours in offices. So changing lifestyle will significantly improve the health of overweight people.
To conclude, this essay completely disagrees that the extended prices of fast food will help in grasping the situation because nowadays taste and fast-paced life are the main factors due to which play people are becoming dependent on high-calorie diet due to taste. It is recommended that government should lodge a publicity campaign on importance of healthy lifestyle, and highlight its drastic effects on fast food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09763313609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60266929688 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3513821887 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261940520104 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852906847261 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478081329197 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151396652919 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212667351005 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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