Description a person that you respectful
In my life. I to meet a special person.This is a monk in pagoda VungTau province . I to regard him as a teacher .I often call him "master" he's pen-name is Thich Chan Quang .The fist time, I have met him in Buddha's birthday in pagoda. he's gait is very leisurely and unruffled .he always shows a gentle smile .master 's eye look very bright , it remains till bound less love with everyone and the preoccupation is about destiny of human. I really admire him whom taught me a lot of things in life . For example morally .master teaches about human love, national love, filial to parents and ideal for living a beautiful life .In addition, he remain still teach me protect the environment . Sine I listened to his teachings that my character has changed .I know how to love and be kind to people. I have given up my selfish character .special thing ,I have built up the ideal of living in my life .Therefore, when I meet master , I feel very touched and respectful. he is a shining example for me follow
Sentence: I to meet a special person.This is a monk in pagoda VungTau province .
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by to
Suggestion: Refer to I and to
Sentence: I to regard him as a teacher .I often call him 'master' he's pen-name is Thich Chan Quang .The fist time, I have met him in Buddha's birthday in pagoda. he's gait is very leisurely and unruffled .he always shows a gentle smile .master 's eye look very bright , it remains till bound less love with everyone and the preoccupation is about destiny of human.
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by to
Suggestion: Refer to I and to
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to he's and pen-name
Description: A noun, singular, proper is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to . and The
Description: The fragment very leisurely and is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace leisurely with adjective
Description: The fragment eye look very is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace look with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: I have given up my selfish character .special thing ,I have built up the ideal of living in my life .Therefore, when I meet master , I feel very touched and respectful. he is a shining example for me follow
Description: A noun, singular, proper is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to . and special
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by an End of sentence
Suggestion: Refer to follow
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flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 184 350
No. of Characters: 786 1500
No. of Different Words: 112 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.683 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.272 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.378 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.881 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.478 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.478 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.249 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5