the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose university certain subjects in 2005. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This bar chart illustrates data about the number of students who chose certain subjects in 2005. The comparison includes eight subjects and divides these subject groups into male and female.
Overall, it can be seen that science subjects were chosen more than non-science subjects. Social Sciences was the most popular subject of female with just under 25 thousand while Mathematics has the lowest number with approximately 5 thousand. Male tended to choose Science most but contrast to Languages, 22.5 thousand and 2.5 thousand respectively. The similar is that the differences of around 20 thousand. Male subjects chosen’s number more than females in Science, Mathematics, Literature, and Law but fewer than in Social Sciences, Languages, and The Arts.
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| 2019-09-21 | andree_3005 | 56 | view |
- the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose university certain subjects in 2005. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- the bar chart below shows the number of students who chose university certain subjects in 2005. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The bar chart below shows the number of student who chose certain university subjects in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 117.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5641025641 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8333043275 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.075053797 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165841096891 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857480863183 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121157181962 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185077161512 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134997894117 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.